Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Script Frenzy Update: Less than 48 hours to go!

A page from my upcoming Script Frenzy script entitled Swords of Destiny.
(Do not attempt to infringe on my copyright, I got it all worked out to where it's illegal to steal my stuff)

[scrippet]
INT. CANTINA BAR - LATER

The four are squashed into a small booth.

Etsuko and Benji sit on one side with untouched waters.

Shapiro and Burls are squeezed unpleasantly on the opposite side with half-empty beers.

Buckshot lays on the floor gnawing on a piece of wood.

SHAPIRO
Name’s Shapiro.
(points to Burls)
Burls.
(points to dog)
Buckshot.

Buckshot YELPS.

ETSUKO
Is that your dog? He’s so cute.

SHAPIRO
Buckshot ain’t no ones dog.

Buckshot growls.

SHAPIRO (CONT’D)
Ain’t cute neither.

BURLS
We just like to enjoy the pleasure of each other’s company.

SILENT BEAT.

SHAPIRO
I’m the brains of this outfit, Burls is the muscle.
(aside)
And none too bright neither.
(aloud)
And Buckshot is good at procuring things. Good at getting rid of undesirables to boot, he can have a pretty nasty bite. Old Burls got bit just the other day didn’t ya?

BURLS
Got me in the hindquarters. I could show ya, but I ain’t a standin’ up.
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1 comments:

Spenturion said...

awesome! glad to see you're using scrippets... they're really nice huh? what page are you at?